Question

Use what you have learned in this lesson to revise the following passage for the appropriate audience and impact. Select words and phrases that will strengthen this critical analysis essay. In the Declaration of Independence, Thomas Jefferson talks about independence through his use of big words and fancy argument skills . First, Jefferson states his thesis, which makes it seem important that the colonists get independence. Next, Jefferson gives evidence against the king of England and how he mistreats the American colonies . Finally, Jefferson suggests that colonists should stop paying taxes and fight , which is the obvious answer to the colonists’ problems.

Answer 1

Answer:

In the Declaration of Independence, Thomas Jefferson talks about independence  

✔ analyzes the purpose of government

through his use of big words and fancy argument skills  

✔ formal English and classical argumentative structure

. First, Jefferson states his thesis, which makes it seem important that the colonists get  

✔ suggests that the colonies should have

independence. Next, Jefferson gives evidence against the king of England and how he mistreats the American colonies  

✔ references his mistreatment of the American colonies

. Finally, Jefferson suggests that colonists should stop paying taxes and fight  

✔ reject the king’s authority and revolt

, which is the obvious answer  

✔ logical solution

to the colonists’ problems.

Explanation:

just did it on edge2020

Answer 2

Answer:

✔ constructs a philosophical support of independence

✔ formal English and classical argumentative structure

✔ suggests that the colonies should have

✔ references his mistreatment of the American colonies

✔ reject the king’s authority and revolt

✔ logical solution

Explanation:

just did it