Answer:
There is a shift
Provided should say provide.
It starts in present-tense then shifts to past-tense.
Explanation:
Although a ballet dancer's pointed shoes appear dainty and delicate, their rigid tips provided incredible support, allowing dancers to balance on the tips of their toes.
The answer is alliteration
The character, Jane, feels powerless. Jane's fingers "quivered", as she is powerless. She also felt an "unveiling... anger" towards the teacher.
Option 2 would be your best answer.
Answer:
Before I attempt to set up in business again I feel I need more experience.
Explanation:
Basically switch it around.
