Using an active voice for the majority of your sentences makes your meaning clear for readers, and keeps the sentences from becoming too complicated or wordy. Passive voice makes sentences wordier and can cloud the meaning of your sentence.

In these examples the use of passive voice can be replaced by active voice by removing extra words like 'been' and re-arranging the sentence structure.

Here are the rewritten sentences:

The thieves have been arrested by the police.

Remove 'been' and 'by' then switch 'police' with 'thieves'.

The police have arrested the thieves.

The marvelous performance delivered by the children enthralled us.

Remove 'delivered by the children'

The marvelous performance enthralled us.

He has been invited to their party.

Remove 'he has' replace with 'they have'

They have invited him to their party.

We have shipped your order.

Simplify the sentence to only have a verb and a subject.

The order has shipped.

The girl recited the poem beautifully.

Replace 'The girl' with 'she'

She recited the poem beautifully.

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3 years ago

Based on the point and evidence, which is the best explanation, or analysis, of the evidence?

makvit [3.9K]

Answer: This suggests that the Mäori believe that teamwork helps family members achieve their goals.

Explanation:

In the Maori creation story, Ranginui (Rangi) who is the skymother and Papatuanuku (Papa) the skyfather, block the sun from their children as they are locked in procreative embrace.

Their children decide to separate them so that they may have light. Working together, they are able to accomplish the task thereby showing that with teamwork, family members can achieve their goals.

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3 years ago

Write a 2-4 sentence explaining how diligence is important for computer science

motikmotik

Answer:

Luca is a very diligent coder. He worked very hard to learn how to code. Since he was a very hard working coder, he singled handedly remade geometry dash in a week using Python. Hope this helps

Explanation:

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3 years ago