The best way to eliminate wordiness is the following:
<em> The audience gave the guest speaker a standing ovation.</em>
Wordiness is the use of more words than necessary to express an idea. The phrase <em>"to give a standing ovation"</em> already comprises the ideas of "rose up" and <em>"applauded"</em>. Thus, they are not necessary in the sentence. Replacing those words with the words <em>"gave the guest speaker a standing ovation"</em> is the right way to eliminate wordiness in that sentence.
The revision that would help expand the ideas in the excerpt
above would be adding more specifics about the sailors' beliefs about the
island.
To add, the Most Dangerous Game opens with a conversation
between two men—Whitney and
Rainsford.
Answer:
Text her friend next time, so they are sure to meet at the same time
B) rang
My aunt rang the dinner bell.
Answer:
The answer is B because the text says "teaching rating is close to zero"
