B: "Good God, You are mad!" He cried aghast.
Answer:
The type of edit to direct quotes which is inappropriate is the following one:
Correcting errors in the quote.
Explanation:
If it is a direct quote, it is supposed to be as genuine as possible, that is, the essence of what was said by that particular person must be kept, and that includes not only what was said, but also how it was said- errors and all.
Eg: Let's say you want to quote Joker (played by Heath Ledger in "The Dark Knight") and you write:
As said by Joker: "Why <u>are you</u> so serious?"
In the example above, the essence of the original quote was lost, since the omission of verb and subject (Why so serious?) was what gave the classic quote its mysterious charm. So, it is best to keep it the way it actually is:
As said by Joker: "Why so serious?"
Scrooge was very obsessed with money, and belle thinks that would interfere with their happiness together
In the beggining, Joise had a terrible attitude towards everything. He explained to the reader how disappointed and bored he was to go on this trip in Coloma, California. Only his father stayed exited to show them the setting of California. But triple G, his great, great grandfather was a hero and great inspiration to him. After getting an assignmnet to write about a historical figure, Triple G, was his obvious choice. Motivated he wanted to find some facts on his great-great grandpa. Going to the library, he found out the truth about his heroic grandpa:/ and he wasnt so heroic anymore.
Remember the beggining? he had attitude? Now he comes to his father to tell him the secret he had firgured out with facts to explain how Triple G couldnt have been all that he says he was. Afterwards, Joise, realized that he had sadend his father. His character changes and also becomes sadned, like the story states, "his heart sank," after reading the 3 sentences he had only found on triple G.
i hope this makes sence:P
and i hope it helps
<span>:D</span>
