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Read an essay about Edgar Allan Poe's story "The Black Cat" and look for weaknesses in the writing. Describe how the writer shou

sp2606 [1]

Explanation:

Phrases to be corrected:

-"The story revolves around the psychology of guilt and a murderer who commits a crime and is able to hide it."

The most concrete idea would be:

The story revolves around the psychology of a murderer who commits a crime and is able to hide it.

-"This article will analyze the issue of violence as it is contained in history".

It could be corrected as the following:

"This article will analyze what influenced the narrator to become a violent man and what the consequences were."

A correct punctuation must be made in the following paragraph:

"These animals included dogs, apes, and even donkeys. The theme of violence is also portrayed when the narrator, realizing his mistake, turns on himself and begins to hurt himself with the knife that he always carried with him."

The first stanza is a continuity of the idea from the previous paragraph, therefore it must be in the previous paragraph with a period followed.

In the following paragraph we can make some editorial corrections as well as punctuation:

"The other theme of the story is that of loyalty. Before the narrator began drinking, he was loyal to his wife and pet cat, Pluto. The theme of loyalty also shows up when the narrator gouges his cat's eye out. Even though his wife saw the kind of cruelty he had subjected the cat to, he was still loyal to him."

We can see in the previous paragraph that the subject of loyalty begins to be discussed, therefore it is not necessary for the writer of the essay to say again "the subject of loyalty is also shown ..." it could be said "We can quote a example when the narrator gouges out his cat's eye ".

The last paragraph, as it is a continuity of the previous paragraph where the writer continues talking about loyalty, must continue that idea in the previous paragraph with a period followed.

Therefore, there should be a single paragraph where it is not necessary to repeat the word "the issue of loyalty" but only leave the word "loyalty" because it is already known that that issue has been discussed. Therefore, they could be as follows:

"The other theme of the story is that of loyalty. Before the narrator began drinking, he was loyal to his wife and pet cat, Pluto. An example we can cite is when the narrator gouges out his cat's eye. Even though his wife saw the kind of cruelty he had subjected the cat to, he was still loyal to him, and loyalty is represented by the cat himself. After the narrator gouged out the cat's eye, the cat was still playing with the narrator after the pierced eye sock had healed. Under normal circumstances, the cat would have fled the house and moved to another house away from the brutality."

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3 years ago

how do you spell and say "ya yeet" backwards no joke it was a date please help I am giving brainliest

Aleonysh [2.5K]

Answer:

Explanation:

1. When you agree with something

2. A strong yes

3. A battle cry when something is thrown or launched Ya yeet.

(Yuh-Yeat) is how you pronounce it (replace the "F" in "feat" and put a "Y" in front. They sound the same but with a "Y" sound instead"

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3 years ago

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What purpose did the use of alliteration and rhyme serve in the ballads from the Anglo-Saxon era? A. They made it easier to reme

liberstina [14]

Hello there.

What purpose did the use of alliteration and rhyme serve in the ballads from the Anglo-Saxon era?

A. They made it easier to remember the words of the ballads, which were recited.

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3 years ago

When children begin to read, they are comprehending decontextualized language. true or false

kotykmax [81]

TRUE

When children begin to read, they are comprehending decontextualized language. The above statement is true

What is decontextualized language?

Decontextualized (“dxt”) language is defined as "language that is removed from the here-and-now. Examples of this kind of decontextualized language use are evident in early conversations between parents and children, particularly in uses of extended discourse such as explanations, narratives and pretend play."

Decontextualized language develops during children's third year, and is used to construct narratives about past or future events (e.g. “We went to the park”), provide explanations (e.g. “I got my sweater because I'm cold”), or engage in pretend play (e.g. “My teddy bear is hungry”)

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2 years ago

Can somebody check this for me

vivado [14]

this is a little hard but it seems to me that you have a wrong answer in number 2 you put ap over extremely but it should be over bird other than that you are good there is probably 1 or 2 mistakes so just go back over it i do not see anymore mistakes.

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3 years ago