Answer:she changed the direction of his life.
Explanation: Because without her, he could not be the man he is today.
I believe this quote in a nutshell is saying life is a gift and rules and religion are the cause of that gift being taken away. Correct me if I’m wrong but that seems to be what the summary would be.
Answer:
The phrase that makes this thesis statement wordy is: electronic mail.
Explanation:
Wordiness refers to making something longer than it should be, that is, using too many words to express something. In the case of the thesis statement we are analyzing here, all words seem to be necessary with the exception of the final phrase. As we know, "electronic mail" is no longer an expression in use. It's been decades since it has been replaced by the shorter version "email", "e" standing for "electronic". Not only does using "electronic mail" make the sentence wordy, it also makes it sound old-fashioned.
Marilyn is the one who is on the EDS without permission! =)
Answer:
the man has white hair
Explanation:
because the grandfather is old
