People believe that being a man means you need to have a deep voice,beard,and spread you legs when you sit to take up space, but being a man actually means being yourself and not letting anyone tear you down. Being a REAL man means to be kind and show the world that you are not going to let anyone tear you down.
Does that answer your question?
So what would be the question you are asking? if you're asking how to hook a reader in your intro start with an onomatopoeia or something like: On a dark and stormy night Elle Mist sat in the corner of her room crying wondering when her parents would come home.
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It's about Tillys reaction to him mom telling him how he's going to be a star and imagining all that can come with that.
