What is "Oread"? I don't know what I'm describing.
For your second paragraph you should do some pros and cons of public and homeschooling, keep them even so it doesn’t look like all of them are just opinions of yours. Also you could add how kids of different ages feel about public and homeschooling. Put in more facts so you don’t keep saying the same sentence over and over in different words because that usually makes the reader get bored. To restate your thesis write it again in the last paragraph but with different words and change it up a little to mean the same thing but with a different structure. Also you should use evidence.
In "A Defence of Poetry,” Shelley suggests that emotions experienced in life are constantly changing. The following lines from "Mutability” can also be seen as a reflection of this idea:
We feel, conceive or reason, laugh or weep;
Embrace fond woe, or cast our cares away
This lines are saying that our emotions change, laugh reflects joy while weeping reflects sadness. Also, one can hold on to woes (sufferings) or one can let go of those. This lines are expressing different emotions one has and therefore reflects the idea that emotions are constantly changing throughout life.
I would say the answer is A