I know that breaking curfew has discouraged the both of you from allowing me to maintain the curfew you allow as is, but logically speaking, me losing my curfew could be more detrimental than me breaking it. For all the hours I miss at work because of lacrosse practice, I need hours to take over so my value at work doesn't plummet to "downsizing level". If I can't leave the house before 8, then there won't be any available hours for me to take over, and we all know how important a part time job is to colleges. You guys were my age once, so you know I need to do everything I can to be presentable to colleges if I want to get merit scholarship money and keep more of that hard earned cash in your wallets and retirement accounts. Could you guys honestly justify directly lessening my opportunities? I'm not getting in any trouble but taking away my curfew may elicit some. Hope this helped!
I believe the tone is somewhat dramatic based on the dialogue such as "shot his hand out in front of him", it makes the story seem a lot more interesting than what it really is; a normal encounter.
