A) The story will be long and tedious. That is the answer.
This paragraph is super... choppy. It needs to be more fluid. Also, the hook is, well, not present. They have a good start with "Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories." You should build more on this idea of why gardening makes you happy. Through these memories you could share what you gain from gardening, and why you should stop thinking just about the time it takes but also the profit you can earn. To get rid of this "choppiness" you connect through the memories.
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Answer:d
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Far meaning aslo limitless
Answer:
i dont know how many sentanes so I did 4 to get started
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I was walking in the park to go to a picnic table, when I heard a bee going 'BUZZZZ' in my ear. I smashed 'squash' and was on my way. when I made it to the spot, I sat down with a 'plop' and started to unpack my lunch. I was eating my sandwich 'chomp' when I saw ants crawling all over my lunch.
