it is more important to think because that is what causes your actions.
Diction can determine tone of writinh
The balloon rocketed into the sky. Though we were frightened, everything ended up being fine.
- The word "quickly" can be removed because speed is implied with the word "rocketed"
- The phrase "into the really cold air" can be removed because it is irrelevant to what's happening. It can be replaced by "into the sky"
- Now "up" can be removed because "into the sky" implies that the balloon went upwards.
- Either the word "scared" or "frightened" can be removed because they're synonyms (I chose to remove "scared")
- "Because it was moving really fast" can be removed because the use of the word "rocketed" beforehand already implies that the balloon was moving fast.
- Lastly , I just reworded and conjoined some of the sentences to make them read more clearly though this isn't necessary. (I changed the third sentence from "However, it was all good in the end," to "everything ended up being fine." I also combined the second and third sentences, adding "though" in front of the second sentence to make it a dependent clause)
Answer:
do something simple, teach the 4 year old something of their age, that they would like, how to make a sandwich, decorate a cookie, remember their phone number...simple and write the books in steps explaining to them in a fun way
Explanation:
page 1 go to the refrig and find all the things you like on your sandwich...show me what you like
page 2 all items on the counter, wash hands
page 3 bread first place it down on a cutting board
page 4 what should go on the sandwich first?
Killing North Korean leader Kim Jong-un<span> might seem like a good solution, but it won't prevent more nuclear tests or war.</span>
