<span>My suggestions are in bold.
"Even since the beginning of it all, America has never truly been one."
</span><span>Change even to ever.
</span><span>"While slavery does not any longer pertains to today’s society, the obstacle of ostracism is still prominent. All the time stories of racial police shootings are in the news. Ostracism, or exclusion, is another concerning problem facing the country."
<span>You introduced us to ostracism more than once. An introduction of an key point should not be repeated.</span><span>
"</span></span>All the time stories of racial police shootings are in the news."
It sounds awkward and seems grammatically incorrect. Revise this sentence.
"<span>The purpose many have in mind when they come to the country, freedom of religion results in thousands of different practices of religion with many different views and beliefs."
</span><span>Add a comma after "freedom of religion."
</span><span>"The people of America also have many different beliefs because of their plentiful diversity and backgrounds."
Plentiful is describing diversity. I'm not sure if this is correct or not, but, just to be safe, consider changing "plentiful diversity and backgrounds" to "variety of backgrounds."</span>
Answer:
C) Climax.
Explanation:
In any story-line, the plot structure will consist of numerous stages which, according to Gustav Freytag, are in five stages. The first is the introduction/ exposition, followed by the rising action, climax, falling action, and finally the conclusion. Through these five stages, we can easily understand the structure of any plot.
In the given excerpt from Franz Kafka's "The Metamorphosis", the two passages create the climax of the whole plot. The climax is when the whole story's main structure came to its highest point, the turning point where the fate of the character(s) or the plot structure depends.
This stage presents the middle ground which will decide how the fates will change. Likewise, the given passage contains the family of Gregor deciding what to do with him. This scene contains the decision of the family "to try and get rid of it", it being Gregor who has been changed to a bug. This presents a conflict in the story where the fate of Gregor was decided and thus, change his life forever.
Answer: for me i would personally write about what struggles humanity is faced with, whether it be global warming, overpopulation, famine, economic collapse...etc. it all depends on the subject.
Explanation:
sorry if this dosnt help. if you want comment me what subject its in and i can help you more.
The point of the first sentence is that Squeaky and Gretchen are becoming closer after the race.
the point of the second sentence is that Squeaky is completely focused when she competes.
