Add phrases to make the story flow smoothly (cohesian markers, pronouns , conjuctions) eliminate unnecesary details. and proofread
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The Great Depression was caused by the stock market crash of 1929- this led America into this economic crisis. And it even worsened during the 1930 dust bowl. The depression was so hard on everyone because unemployment reached 20%, industrial production rates fell, and many more reasons
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