Answer:
if you can give us a story ill edit my answer do it on the question though
Explanation:
Answer:
I would love to see more descriptive words! Phrases such as, "I was so hungry that I swear I started digesting myself" may be helpful, as you want to keep your reader captivated! Instead of including the lyrics of the song, I suggest just stating that he sang the entire song, as this takes up valuable space. Instead of describing the song, try describing what the narrator feels. Perhaps her heart is "fluttering with joy," and his hair is "swaying like a dove's feathers in flight". Otherwise, I enjoyed this excerpt!
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Give us part of the passage where they are having the conversation
Explanation:
We use
personal pronouns in place of noun phrases. We often use them to refer
back to people and things that we have already identified (underlined):
<span>Peter complained to the chef about the meal. She wasn’t very helpful so he spoke to the manager.</span> (she = the chef, he = Peter)
<span>A:<span>Where’s the knife? I can’t find</span> it.B:It’s in the drawer. (it = the knife)</span>
Personal pronouns show person and number. He, she, him and her show gender. They have different subject and object forms (except you, it and one which have only one form):
D. To make poems easier to say and remember
(I think )
