I think it may be a bit long depending on how much your teacher wants and you get to the point vaguely but overall it’s pretty good. better than what i would’ve put
0451 I think if not refer to been a while since i played that
http://bioshock.wikia.com/wiki/Twilight_Fields_Funeral_Homes
A-the housemates sit around the radiant fireplace
What is the article? I’m sorry I can’t see it