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ycow [4]
4 years ago
9

Plz tell me if this essay is good also plz tell me if i made a mistake or two or three or you get the point also can you give me

some ideas for the conclusion.
(here is the prompt)
Were the Founding Fathers justified in rebelling against the British government and declaring independence?
In a well-developed essay that includes an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion, explain whether or not the Founding Fathers were justified in declaring independence. Be sure to address counterclaims in your essay and include reasons and evidence to support your argument.

(here is the essay)
Imagine you are part of the colonies in 1765 and the Stamp Act was just enacted. You're enraged so you go along with the constant chant of "Taxation without representation is tyranny". Soon, chants for representation turn to chants of complete separation! These chants lead to mass anarchy with people declaring their right to be free from Britain.

Declaring independence was justified especially after the Intolerable Acts. The British passed several laws such as the Boston Port Act, Massachusetts Government Act, Administration of Justice Act, and the Quebec Act just to name a few .These atrocious laws required the colonies to do things such as closing the port of Boston, having its royally-appointed governor have wide-ranging powers,and granted emancipation for the Catholic, French-speaking settlers of the province.While some may say that the war was justified in declaring independence was not. The British were the first ones to fire, sparking the war therefore making it justified. maybe considered Declaring independence was not justified given they could have stayed and then everything would have stayed the same.

However looking at the details you can see that declaring independence was very much justified particularly because they wanted to get away from the Intolerable Acts and the Boston Massacre and they had every right to.

In conclusion the Founding Fathers were very much justified in rebelling against the British as well as declaring Independence. ideaz

also i'm giving 50 points because i'm nice (:
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Alexxandr [17]4 years ago
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Answer:

this is perfect you gave details and important information

nikklg [1K]4 years ago
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Explanation: that looks good to me

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