Answer:
As I was walking home from school one day, I saw a lady bug. It was one of those red one's. The more typical color you would see here. I continued walking leaving the lady bug on the sidewalk. When I arrived home I opened the door to the smell of a very well cooked dinner. I walked into the kitchen throwing my backpack into the living room. "How was your day?" I heard my mom say over the stove's crackling noise's. "it was good I guess.." I said with a mix of sadness in my voice. "AW, does baby need a tissue?" My big brother yelled exaggeratingly from the kitchen table. I persuaded myself to ignore him, I walked into the living room to get out my homework. I analyzed it and let out a big *sigh*. I had to paraphrase someone else's words into a paragraph.
(that's not short.. is it?) (Also I didn't use negotiate)
Answer:
(look in 'Explanation)
Explanation:
Someone would visualize this the scene when they feel alone
<u>Answer:</u>
My dear Father,
I am fine here and I hope you will receive this letter in the best of health. I received your letter ten days ago but I was busy in my midterm exams so couldn’t write to you earlier. You seemed quite concerned about my studies as my previous result was below 80%. The result of the midterm exams has been announced and you will be delighted to know that I have got 88% marks in it. I owe this success to god's favour, your prayers and blessings and the proper guidance of my worthy teachers. For the final exams, I shall have to work hard even more. I find difficulty in mathematics and I am planning to get private coaching in it. I didn’t prepare myself well enough in Pakistan. studies and I am concentrating on it as well. Moreover, I’m trying to improve my writing speed because at times I cannot mange to complete the paper. I want to assure you that I have recognised my failings and now trying my utmost to improve them. I have reduced my sleeping hours.I have learned that one cannot climb the ladder of success with one’s hands in pockets.
I know your wishes and support are my strength and I will prove myself in studies. Pay my compliments to all at home.
Your loving son/daughter,
________
A ~ Dialogue.
<span>Ex, The fault in our starts had most dialogue pertaining to the characters which helped John Green the writer tell their story, it flowed a lot smoother then reading a silent story. </span>
The behavior of the students ,the schedule, the rules that the students are not follow and what !akes the reputation of the school grows down
