This is an incomplete thought because the comma makes it seem like the sentence will continue.
<span><span>Have I studied my subject with sufficient care so that I understand what qualities in it caused my initial response, and have I studied it with sufficient care so that I have deepened or otherwise changed that response?
</span><span>Is the title of my essay at least moderately informative?
</span><span>Is the opening paragraph interesting and, by its end, have I focused on the topic?
</span><span>Do I state my main point (thesis) soon enough--perhaps even in the title--and do I keep it in view throughout my essay?
</span><span>Is the organization reasonable? Does each point lead to the next without irrelevancies?
</span><span>Does each paragraph revolve around a topic idea, a criterion that directly supports my thesis?
</span><span>Are generalizations or assertions about personal responses supported by illustrative examples, concrete evidence, research, etc.?
</span><span>Are the sentences concise, clear, and emphatic?
Are needless words and inflated language eliminated?
</span><span>Is the final paragraph conclusive without being repetitive?
</span><span>Are the quotes and paraphrases accurate?
Is credit given to sources?
Are copies of relevant sources included and important passages highlighted?
</span><span>Are long quotes really necessary?
</span><span>Has the essay been proofread?
Are spelling and punctuation correct?</span></span>
Answer:
Once upon a time a king had announced that anyone who wanted the post of personal assistant must meet him. Many people gathered in the palace. The king led them to a pond and said, "Whoever will fill this pond's water in this pot will be chosen for the post. But remember, there is a hole in the pot."
So some people left without a single try. While some people tried to once and then said, "The king has already chosen someone else. Let's go."
But one man kept filling the pot with pond water patiently. He filled the water in the pot from the pond and came out of the ground. But always within a few moments, the water poured on the ground completely. He tried that uncountable number of times. At last, the pond became empty. The man found a diamond ring in the empty pond and he gave it to the king. At this, the king said, "This ring is a reward for your patience and hard work. You are fit for the job. "So the man confirmed that patience pays.
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