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Because they don’t try harder ?
Answer:
I don't think you need a comma in this sentence but if you do the only place I can think of putting one before "Susan" but I don't think that's right
Explanation:
Remove the comma after apples and put a comma after upstate
1.) the struggle of the bird
this could be foreshadowing doodles death and echoing the struggles of doodle
2.)the color red
this could be symbolizing death also because of graphic ways death could happen