Question

During the revision process, which type of wording should a writer delete in a narrative essay

Answer 1

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Answer 2

All the words that tends to make it sound like an argumentative essay. So basically, when you talk about a narrative essay it should be written in an organized way with the goal of just telling a story and not trying to be persuasive.  First pronouns should be used.