Answer:
The only thing you can do is the "Contact us" and see what they say
People should not drink because can cause lung cancer
Explanation:
try not to repeat "My responsibilities".
In your last paragraph, try doing this...
" In terms on my education, my studies remain my first responsibility, to get educated, to earn a diploma and to become a successful person in the future, however in order for me to be a responsible person I need to focus on taking care of myself... ......"
something like that...
but other wise it is okay...