To get to your final thesis<span>, </span>you<span>'ll need to </span>refine<span> your draft </span>thesis<span> so that it's specific and arguable. Ask if your draft </span>thesis<span> addresses the assignment. Question each part of your draft </span>thesis. Clarify vague phrases and assertions. Investigate alternatives to your draft thesis<span>.</span>
When refining and polishing a thesis statement either during the research process or for the final essay, the thing you must continually ask yourself is, “Does the thesis relate to the assignment?” It is also important to examine every part of the draft thesis to make sure that any vague phrases and assertions are eliminated. Finally, never forget to ask yourself, “Are there any better alternatives?” There usually are!
Both Napoleon and Snowball definitely want the the farm run by animals by getting rid of Mr. Johns and they both are instrumental in spreading Animalism. But they are also different, Snowball wants animals to work together and run the farm, while Napoleon is more totalitarian and eventually usurps power.
