Well, the diction being used here is very elementary. For example, the use of colors and the correlated feelings to these colors might imply that it is for a younger audience. This alone is sufficient evidence to say that this story should be read to young children. Also, if you ever wonder what audience might like to hear this, imagine yourself reading this story to a room full of teach test group, then ask yourself: "which group would enjoy this story more?"
Sentence 4 needs to be revised because interrupts the flow of the author’s tone
My three options are the king is wearing elaborate clothing made of fancy materials. The king is dressed like a soldier to show that he is willing to go into battle. The king has a sword and sits next to a helmet. The king sits next to a crown, which symbolizes his power. The fourth option doesn’t quiet fit with the rest.
My teacher
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