I would say either ode or sestina
Answer:
Know Your Audience. One of the top rules applies to everyday conversation and the written word. ...
Do Your Research. If you're attempting a short story or novel, do your research. ...
Be Emphatic. According to Forbes, leaders follow a certain vernacular. ...
Be Careful With Connotation. ...
Stay True to Your Own Voice. ...
Choose Authenticity.
Explanation:
A good hook would be "Is safety more important than privacy "
If you are telling us to revise the sentence, one error is that there is a double negative. 'not' and 'un' would cancel each other, and the revised sentence 'I wouldn't say he's the nicest guy around, but I've seen him behave kindly before.'
