Well "I" is the person and notes and margins is the number cuz theres more than one
<span> "Some ladies are very stiff about having their servants’ friends in the house overnight." During the Gothic time period, this would have been a common thing and therefore added drama</span>
We have sung that version of the song for the past few years.
""And his eyes have all the seeming of a demon’s that is dreaming""
The sentence I would choose is: "He was looking down at his outstretched hands as he talked". To me, it implies that he cannot look into the eyes of the person he is speaking to, as if he doesn't feel he is worthy.
