It can be said that this excerpt is an approach to the "forbidden door". it seems that the reader gets in the mood by reading this description.
The paragraph is full of vivid ideas which makes it simple to picture what is happening and how this person is feeling when listening to that tapping,
Love Story by Taylor Swift, because there are two people who love each other but there families don't like each other but he talks to her dad and her dad ends up giving them his blessing so they can marry.
Hope this helps
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- Kayla <3
A placement would be right because then you can see how it sounds