I've been on this road before, when pain strikes and tears fall down my face, I'm silent, that's all I can be is ... silence.
Explanation:
In my opinion, this paragraph is good, it reminds me a little "Night III" of José Asunción Silva,<u> with the author entering a state of melancholy from the beginning</u>, however, I recommend that in the last sentence where it says <em>"</em><u><em>eso es</em></u><em> todo lo que puedo ser,"</em> skip the words <em>"</em><u><em>eso es</em></u><em>"</em> <u>in this way you could reaffirm that you are silent since all you can be is silence</u>, or be one with silence, it would really improve the sense of the narrative.
