Question

Something i wrote :))

Answer 1

Answer:

Ive been on this road before, when pain hits and the tears roll down my face, i am in silence, thats all i can be is... silent.

Answer 2

Answer:

The translation to English of the paragraph is:

• I've been on this road before, when pain strikes and tears fall down my face, I'm silent, that's all I can be is ... silence.

Explanation:

In my opinion, this paragraph is good, it reminds me a little "Night III" of José Asunción Silva, with the author entering a state of melancholy from the beginning, however, I recommend that in the last sentence where it says "eso es todo lo que puedo ser," skip the words "eso es" in this way you could reaffirm that you are silent since all you can be is silence, or be one with silence, it would really improve the sense of the narrative.