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I became, in short, the gangling farmer-boy my aunt had known, C. Scourged with chilblains and bashfulness, my hands cracked and raw from corn husking.
Scourge is something that causes suffering.</span>
The author wants to prompt an emotion in the reader.
The excerpt wants us to feel for Neto and his sadness of the adult fans' attitute towards the Mexican players, and to know Andy will help hi aas much as he can
Answer:
Order of ideas, tone, and punctuation and phrasing could be revised.
Explanation:
It is known that when giving a presentation or writing an essay, the speaker should convince the public little by little, providing evidence that will support the final hypothesis, in this case, how great Roosevelt was. Due to this, the beginning would be: "Theodore Roosevelt was a great president because..."
Punctuation and phrasing are other issues in the paragraph. Some sentences are too long and carry a lot of information that could be overwhelming for the reader (specially for such a short paragraph.) In example, the phrase "he brought about much-needed social, political, and economic reform" could be written again: "his impact could be seen in almost every aspect of the country, such as in politics, economics, and in society in general."
The first statement could be at the end, like "an equal share of opportunities. Due to this, Roosevelt is the greatest president."
Tone is also important because it seems to be part of an essay or a presentation, so words like "broke up" could be changed for more proper ones.
Answer:
I feel like his poem mean something but i can't get it through my head cause its so blurry but i know one thing he's probably talking about someone or feeling down but, hes something i'd never felt.
Explanation:
