The second sentence is correctly edited. I hope this helps!
I feel like Jorie is a fake friend I can’t believe she’s writing about everything they did she could have just said we went to the beach not be like “the food was awesome”
the answer is "Shlemiel's treatment of the dog shows that Shlemiel is a kind, tender person.'
Sample Response: The Cyclops is angry that Odysseus, a
weak and tiny man, was able to blind him and trick him. To make matters
worse, Odysseus has no regrets, and he does not apologize even though
the Cyclops offers to treat him well if he returns. Instead, Odysseus
insults Cyclops more than once during his escape. Cyclops knows that the
gods have power over men's lives, and this is his only opportunity for
revenge. Thus, he is motivated to seek revenge against Odysseus.
