It looks great! One thing I always struggle with as well is dividing paragraphs. This is important, it looks neater and is professional.
I think you should also add how at first, Hades and Persephone refuse to help, but then Orpheus uses his harp and sings about his grief, which persuades them to help Orpheus.
Good luck!
I haven't read the outsiders in like 2 years but I do remember Pony boy and his friend (I forgot sorry) were wanted for murder so they ran away and hid in an abandoned church for a while but that's only one of the major problems I remember from the book
The answer would be they evoke an emotional response from readers.
Answer:
I think the answer is B
Explanation:
Nothing in the original passage says anything about it being night time.
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This one: "Lee noticed a problem and alerts a teacher".
The second verb should not have been changed to present tense.
You should change the verb alert to past tense: "Lee noticed a problem and alerted a teacher".
