Assuming that you want to fix the vague sentence, it would be better if the sentence is like this :
The school computers arrived with preloaded games. These were the second batch that the school had received
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Answer:
The lectures were addressed to individuals who could see to highlight and create awareness on the discrimination and withholding of privileges to the blind.
Explanation:
Written by Kate M. Foley, the book, Five Lectures on Blindness was meant to be read at the summer session of the University of California in 1918. The author who was blind herself but was mentally intelligent and smart had been denied jobs due to her disability. She wrote this book to draw the attention of the public to the discrimination being meted out to blind people.
For example, she talked about a very smart lawyer who when he became blind, was now pitied by his colleagues and would not be offered jobs by clients. She appealed to people with sight to show more empathy to the blind and allow them to do work that they were qualified for.
The given line above is actually made by Francis Pharcellus Church which is taken from "<span>Yes, Virginia, There is a Santa Claus". And based on this line, I can say that the emotion that the author appeals here is awe and wonder in the unknown. The best answer to this would be option B. Hope this helps.</span>
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I'm not sure there is a misplaced modifier, but there still is a problem. Students are 3rd person, you is second person. It is more common to use you in this instance. According to the new rules, you will not be allowed access to computers only if you arrive before 9 p.m.
Marginally I don't think According to the new rules is a dangling modifier. Others may not agree. You can get rid of the beginning of the sentence if you are not sure.
Answer: The new rules just came out. Those rules say that you will not be allowed access to the computers if you arrive later than 9:00 p.m.
