The argument is ineffective and can be improved significantly. First of all, he writes the claim in the first person. A formal persuasive essay should be in the form of third person. The author can improve his support by using less opinions and back-up his thesis with facts and evidence and does not take a strong stance on the conclusion clincher. The author also does not efficiently connect his essay. There is no cohesion and his diction is weak. He can improve it by using stronger vocabulary.
Thomas Pringle was born in January 5, 1789, in Blaiklaw, Roxburghshire, South Africa. He and studied at Kelso and afterwards, in 1805, at Edinburgh University. He became Commissioner of the Public Records of Scotland, and co-editor of The Edinburgh Monthly Magazine and Constable's Magazine, in 1817. He was married to Margaret Brown. In 1819 he published his first book of poems, The Autumnal Excursion.
By 1824 he had become co-editor of the South African Commercial Advertiser and had opened a school. Two years later he left South Africa for London, where he did literary work and served as Secretary to the Anti-Slavery Society until his death on December 5, 1834.
Pringle is the author of The Bushman.
These lines suggest that:
D.) His lifestyle enables him to survive in situations that would devastate other cultures.
<u>Bushmen are known for living in the extremist conditions of the Kalahari desert, where other African tribes would die, they thrive.</u>
Answer:
Dissensions mean strong agreement.
Explanation:
I think its d because irony means you are meaning the exact opposite of what your saying
Your answer should be:
A) The terrible loss of life during the battle
