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He is the best friend of Isaac and Hazel Grace's boyfriend. Augustus is described as being tall, very handsome, intelligent, having blue eyes and mahogany hair. He is a main character and the male love interest.
"Brennan on the Moor" is structured in this way, so that the longer stanzas can follow the tale of Brennan and give more details to the story. The shorter stanzas act as a chorus, which is usually used to come back to the main idea of a song or poem (in this case, the idea that Brennan is the hero of the poem).