The claim includes personal pronouns which is disqualified from being in any argumentative essay. It does state a clear view of what the claim is, nor does it give information regarding if people should own pets. The author does absolutely nothing to support his claim, credibly. He supported his claim with, once again, personal preferences, and does not take a strong stance on the conclusion clincher. The author concludes to his own liking, and it is not issued in 3rd person as should be stated. The POV is in error. The author refuses to place an argumentative bearing on his essay, and continues in 1st person rather than the preferred 3rd. Transitions are lacking, and when used, aren’t used correctly.
<span>The claim includes personal pronouns which is disqualified
from being in any argumentative essay. It does state a clear view of what the
claim is, nor does it give information regarding if people should own pets. The
author does absolutely nothing to support his claim, credibly. He supported his
claim with, once again, personal preferences, and does not take a strong stance
on the conclusion clincher. The author concludes to his own liking, and it is
not issued in 3rd person as should be stated. The POV is in error.
The author refuses to place an argumentative bearing on his essay, and
continues in 1st person rather than the preferred 3rd. Transitions
are lacking, and when used, aren’t used correctly. </span>
Helping your community can be narrowed down to a bunch of things but it is really just doing a good deed. So let's say that a elderly lady is putting groceries up by herself, you then offer to help her. But you can also be present in community events like a fundraiser or carnival or anything.
