Templeton is mean and rude
I think maybe, the issue is the lack of emotional resonance, and the use of terms like “or anything”. Younger people tend to use these terms, and have less power in the emotional realm, at least when it comes to expressing themselves. So, maybe try lessening the terms that are flounce-y and deepen the emotional aspect of this essay, possibly? Just suggestions from an outside eye, good luck!
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Prejudcise against jewish people has always been a problem, but yes it got extreme in Germany in WW2
I hope this is helpful!
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you could write about why reading is fun. you could put in you fav book and what you found interesting about it. Or, you could do some creative writing about it. here is a list on what you could include-
-why is it fun
-what is good about it
-why you think it is fun
-do for or against argument
