Which revision strategies can improve the flow of writing?
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Dear beloved brother,
I strongly advise you to reconsider leaving school to start a business, i suggest you get a degree before starting a business. Because you may run into problems that you (at your current intelligence level) may not be able to fix, and unless you have business strong partners, you’ll never succeed in your goal. So please, adhed my advice, and continue your school studies.
Yours lovingly, Big sister
(I hope this helps you ♥︎)
I strongly advise you to reconsider leaving school to start a business, i suggest you get a degree before starting a business. Because you may run into problems that you (at your current intelligence level) may not be able to fix, and unless you have business strong partners, you’ll never succeed in your goal. So please, adhed my advice, and continue your school studies.
Yours lovingly, Big sister
(I hope this helps you ♥︎)