Answer: It does not hook the reader,
Explanation: If i was skimming thesis statements I wouldn't even think about this one because it doesn't hook me it doesn't make me go "wait what????" or like "that is sick!" or like "oooooh i would totally watch that play" or "woah that play sounds awesome!"
So what exactly is the question? I think you need to put a source so we know how to answer it.
Answer: A Metaphor
Explanation: It is a metaphor because you are comparing someone to something without using like or as .
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Grade 7 - AIR Scoring Guides
Answer:“The windows were ajar and gleaming white against the fresh grass outside that seemed to grow a little way into the house. A breeze blew through the room, blew curtains in at one end and out the other like pale flags, twisting them up toward the frosted wedding-cake of the ceiling, and then rippled over the wine-colored rug, making a shadow on it as wind does on the sea. The only completely stationary object in the room was an enormous couch on which two young women were buoyed up as though upon an anchored balloon. They were both in white, and their dresses were rippling and fluttering as if they had just been blown back in after a short flight around the house.”
Explanation: :P
