Answer:
Please review our suggestion for paving over the muddy area where students wait before school.
Explanation:
This revision is the most formal and respectful. The second one is very forward and informal, the third one uses too many adjectives like awesome, which is not formal. The last one sounds okay until they use obviously, which is very forward and disrespectful.
Answer:
Romeo and Juliet:
An age-old vendetta between two powerful families erupts into bloodshed. A group of masked Montagues risk further conflict by gatecrashing a Capulet party. A young lovesick Romeo Montague falls instantly in love with Juliet Capulet, who is due to marry her father’s choice, the County Paris. With the help of Juliet’s nurse, the women arrange for the couple to marry the next day, but Romeo’s attempt to halt a street fight leads to the death of Juliet’s own cousin, Tybalt, for which Romeo is banished. In a desperate attempt to be reunited with Romeo, Juliet follows the Friar’s plot and fakes her own death. The message fails to reach Romeo, and believing Juliet dead, he takes his life in her tomb. Juliet wakes to find Romeo’s corpse beside her and kills herself. The grieving family agree to end their feud.
Explanation:
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