Notice the repeated use of commonly used words in the paragraph below. Use a thesaurus to improve the maturity of the writing by
replacing five words in bold. Rewrite the paragraphs. Use proper spelling and grammar. Last summer I read a book that I really liked. It was the first time I have ever liked a book that much. The book was about a man who had been shipwrecked on a deserted island. It was a good story, and I would recommend it to anyone who likes a good story.
Last year on vacation, I read a book that I really enjoyed. It was the first time I have ever liked a book that much. It was about a man who had been shipwrecked on a deserted island. It was a good storybook, and I would prefer it to anyone who likes reading.
