Thirst of all, in the prewriting stage while researching the topic of a story or a <span>report the author should consider his audience and purpose. It is a very important because if ignoring this aspect the end </span>result of the work may turn to<span> be a failure. It is like writing scientific researches for children, or medicine a</span>rticles for drivers or sellers, or something like that.
How long is the story supposed to be?
The tense is all mixed up, but it looks like present is used most often, so "emitted" should be changed to "emits" and "pulled" should be changed to "pulls." I can't see the entire paragraph so just make sure that's consistent.
You don't need a comma in "running towards us with the fire extinguisher."
"Your mother and me" should be "Your mother and I." For reference try taking our "your mother" - it sounds pretty silly to say "me thinks" unless you're in the 1600s, right? And it should be "think" instead of "thinks."
The passage used a combination of comparison and contrast and: <span> C. cause and effect.
</span>The passage give us a well descriptive explanation on how the microorganisms (the cause) developed in such a way to the point where their fossils ended up as a petroleum/coal (effect)
I honestly have no idea what that is
