Really well written and definitely gives concrete detail as I can imagine this scene in my mind by just reading it.
Help her white out the old grade and write a new, better grade on it. However, it would only be positive peer pressure if the best friend reads up on the subject first.
A.I stay up all night studying the words for the spelling bee. And you can see me any time of day practicing running. I never walk if I can trot, and shame on Raymond if he can’t keep up.B.But as they get to me, they slow down. I’m ready to fight, ‘cause like I said I don’t feature a whole lot of chit-chat, I much prefer to just knock you down right from the jump.C.I dig my sneaker into the grass and stare at Gretchen who’s staring back, we both wondering just who did win.<span>D.With a little more study I can beat Cynthia and her phony self at the spelling bee. And if I bugged my mother, I could get piano lessons and become a star.</span>
“The rock star was wild”
“The smiling baby is really cute”
“This is my new basketball goal”