I am guessing that you are wanting me to fix this sentence, but if you want more help I will need more information.
I would make this sentence better by changing the word 'tinkered' to repaired. It is a more professional word and implies that Nelson actually knows what he is doing.
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Critical reading means that a reader applies certain processes, models, questions, and theories that result in enhanced clarity and comprehension. Pretty much, they aren't just skimming the text and are fully processing it.
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write an essay
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you think we want to write an essay for you? i recommend 3 pages. 5 pages to really impress your teachers.
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