The author uses specific data, reasons, and quotations to support her argument effectively, but the excerpt would be stronger if she included eyewitness testimony or personal stories.
Explanation:
She speaks about the aspect of media and about their comments that can be compared with American demonstrators of peace from 1968. They are praising the effort to be democratic, for the part that has been inhabited with autocrats for a long time. She didn't include her stories in this.
