Answer:
Some say that a tsunami's sea wave can scotch an entire island. All you will hear is a sudden silence, shadowed by the roar of a wave and then Splash! You are drowned in debri and dampened by dirty water.
Explanation:
Alliteration: "Some say...tsunami's sea...scotch" "sudden silence" "drowned in debri....dampened by dirty"
Onomotoppoeia: "Splash"
A snake coiled and ready to strike would be an amazing scene ending that wants to present a symbol for increasing tension. Quiet people and dark cities are brooding, not very full of tension, while a church in a wilderness also represents something else.
They have stood up for a specific cause. In that specific cause, they stayed strong even though that was the only choice they had. They have put someone else's needs before there's. Endangering their own life to make sure the other got home safely.
That work?
Answer:
I think its lovely
Explanation:
But it also depends on what style of poetry you were given but if its freestyle it's good <3