Question

Rewrite it to make it represent good human relations skills

Answer 1

When Bart was 16 years old, he moved to New Jersey. Despite the low numbers of kids his age, he made friends with the ones who were his age. When the winter's came around, Bart's neighbor Mr. Jones would go out and remove the snow from his sidewalk. Being the lovely young man Bart was, he would go out and offer help to Mr. Jones instead of playing video games inside. When the summer rolled back around, Mr. Jones offered to let Bart swim in his pool for being so helpful with the snow in the winter.