"A Good Man is Hard To Find" is a short story written by Flannery O'Connor in 1953. The story focuses on a family car trip with the Bailey family. The Grandmother continuously attempts to reroute the trip. Through many stops and hurtles the characters highlight a discussion of subjective values leading to the declaration "a good man is hard to find."
Even though you didn't give us the fragment with the comma slice, it isn't really necessary here as we can answer just based on these 4 options here. All options apart from the second one are correct - only the second option doesn't fix the mistake of the comma splice, whereas the other options do but connecting the sentences properly.
"Until the sun makes the hills it's grave"
"I feel my soul start leaving, like an old man's hair receding"
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