“I saw you at the practice run…”
The best thing to do is to use transitions. But you did not give any of the following
1 capitalize Lincoln because Lincoln is a person and noun.
Answer :)
I had a very good friend called Liam. I used to always go to the park with him and play with each other. but one day, his attitude seemed wired. I tried to talk to him, but he just ignored me, so i slapped him playfully in the arm, when he suddenly punched me in my stomach, and broke my rib. He ended up breaking his own fingers, but i just remember how mad he was at me, for a reason i never knew.
i hope this helps!! :)
another one!!!
this is a story from my friend who dosent mind me sharing, but here it goes.
along time ago when i was very little, i was being teased, but i made it seem like a big deal. One of the kids who was teasing told me to mind my own business, but i got mad so i defended myself and said, " you shodent say that." the kid was got very mad and actually came up to me and pulled my hair. I started to cry, because it hurt, but someone intervened and the kid got in trouble.
sorry if this isnt good enough, but i dont know what else to write. :]
