<span>You can start with a question, an interesting fact, or a description of an event. bUT DO NOT start with "My essay is about" or "I will be talking about." If you do, your audience will throw tomatoes at you BUT NOT PUTING THEM IN THEIR MOUTHES (no pun intended). I'm telling you.
Interesting facts can perk up the audience's attention to the essay (or paragraph).
Now, for your body.
STAY ON TOPIC! If you go from talking about the importance of eating healthy foods to how to party or even what your favorite foods are, that pretty much deflates this rule and --- more tomatoes.
Don't forget to give 3 - 5 facts about why. You should state them in order using transitional words, such as first, second, and third. Or "to start off with", "next", "then you have", and "lastly". These are pretty basic to keep everyone on track.
BACK UP YOUR OPINIONS WITH FACTS! This is PROBABLY A persuasive paragraph, so you need to make people agree with you.
Bad paragraph:
"First, it is important to eat healthy. Second," and at that point --- tomatoes. Facts back up your opinion to prove it correct, and you might even see someone throw away their popcorn listening to you.
Lastly is the conclusion --- well, just toss the intro there and change it up. Or, you can make a new one that is catchy.
Ex:
"So, eating healthy foods (include words from previous sentences), and that is worth more than perking your taste buds to sweets."
Now you're ready. Don't stare at that blank paper nervously. i TRIED THAT AND WELL YOU CAN ALREADY SEE THAT I GOT A FACE FULL OF TOMATOES Using these common rules, you will persuade the audience to stop throwing tomatoes at you and stuff that healthy veggie into their mouth.</span>
The line ¨Thy baited hook shall tangle me no more¨ because fish are beguiled or tricked into biting a hook with glittery lures or bait and that would be what the author is comparing love to
They had good military leaders and military leadership. Also their economy was good because of the vast land they had.
C is grammatically correct
