Hi. Even though you showed a text, you didn't show any questions about that text. However, when researching this text on the internet, I was able to find a question, which asked that the errors presented in this text be pointed out.
In this case, we can conclude that all punctuation that the text presents is incorrect.
The correct thing would be that between the words "newspaper" and "Deeter" there was a comma, since this clause presents a continuity of thought. Also, between the words "breakfast" and "the," there should be a period, as the word "breakfast" ends one of the narrators' thoughts and the word "the," starts another thought. In addition, the word "the" must be written with the capital letter "T", since every word, after a period, must start with a capital letter.
Finally, after the word "floor" a period should be placed, as this word ends a thought.
(i’m assuming it’s supposed to be in first person, if it’s not you can just change the pov) To start my night time routine, I jump in the shower to rinse off after a long day. after that i get dressed into my pajamas for the night, usually an old t-shirt and a pair of sweatpants. after I get dressed i brush through my hair to get any tangled out, and head to the bathroom to brush my teeth. after flossing and gargling mouthwash, i go back to my room and double check to make sure i’ve done all of my homework that is due tomorrow. if i’m all caught up on my schoolwork, i go on my phone for a little bit, either scrolling through social media or texting friends. around eleven, i close my phone for the night and settle into bed, trying to get as much sleep as i can before my 6am alarm goes off.
hope this helps!
They ran up the hill in the heavy rain. let's label the parts oof the sentence
They-subject
ran-verb
ran up the hill-predicate
So they is being used as the subject
The answer is falling action